Whatever this is.: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/896794661/whatever-this-isHyperstarter Score
21%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
2,174
Pledge Amount
$171,446.58
of $165,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Everything You Need To Know About The Upcoming Season Of "The Outs" www.buzzfeed.com|High Traffic Goldman had even greater success with his second Brooklyn-based project, Whatever this is. , in |
 Is this the gay Lena Dunham? | Salon.com www.salon.com|High Traffic the New Black" and "Boardwalk Empire." Goldman recently raised some $170,000 for a follow-up series on Kickstarter , and was invited to the White House on the |
 Can Web Series Creators Turn Their Work Into a Career? | IndieWire www.indiewire.com $60,000 into a $165,000 Kickstarter campaign for six, twenty-minute |
 Here Is A New TV Show You Need To Start Watching | Thought Catalog thoughtcatalog.com it, you still have a few days to donate to their Kickstarter . Do it. Donate so the show can get made |
 Benedict Cumberbatch Officiates Gay Wedding www.out.com|High Traffic 11 days to go to meet their Kickstarter goal for Whatever this is , a new show about a group of New Yorkers |
General Sites
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 “Whatever this is" is what you should watch right now! - Out In Jersey outinjersey.net visit their Kickstarter campaign and donate before time runs out: www.kck.st/15ftlXX F |
 Creators of Successful Web Series "The Outs" Embark on Another Project - Popspoken popspoken.com the team have raised more than $62,000 so far on their Kickstarter page . They need to raise $150,000 to meet their Kickstarter |
 We Love Soaps: INDIE HOUSE: MY SYNTHESIZED LIFE, WHATEVER THIS IS, THE STAFFORD PROJECT, HEADSHOTS, BROKEN AT LOVE, Get Your Hot as Hell Tickets www.welovesoaps.net get to do what you love? Check out the show's Kickstarter page which has already raised more than $40K. |
 Oversight – Electron Dance www.electrondance.com Oh, and I just backed my second-ever Kickstarter: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/896794661/whatever-this-is |
 Whatever This Is 預告片[The Outs分手後新作] [MP4][18.4MB][英文字幕][百度雲] - [ 酷 儿 影 视 ] - Queer As Folk中文站 | 同志亦凡人中文站 | QAF中文站 - Powered by Discuz! Nov 4, 2020|www.qafone.co [英文原文來自 Kickstarter ] |
Whatever this is.: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 1 | The title is too shortTITLE: 17 The first job of your headline is to grab attention. Describe your project with an easily understood, communicable and unique benefit. |
 2 | The description length may be too shortDESCRIPTION: 76 Consider revising the description wording. A good description can help potential backers understand what the project is about quickly. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.