The She Series Book: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/celara/the-she-series-bookHyperstarter Score
21%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
4,249
Pledge Amount
$240,943
of $75,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Missing LA - by Amy Ratcliffe - Roads Go Ever On amyratcliffe.substack.com back the project on Kickstarter now |
 Jackass Vs Dolly Troubled Waters podcast Feb 9, 2021|player.fm Plus our head writer, Riley Silverman would like to plug The She Series Book on Kickstarter |
 Jackass vs Dolly by Troubled Waters | Podchaser www.podchaser.com Plus our head writer, Riley Silverman would like to plug The She Series Book on Kickstarter |
 Karen Hallion's She Series Book: Inspiring Women, Great Art Dec 8, 2021|www.themarysue.com According to The She Series Kickstarter , this journey started 3 years ago, when Karen was |
 Project Updates for The She Series Book on BackerKit Page 1 Aug 1, 2022|the-she-series-book.backerkit.com This post is for backers only. Please visit Kickstarter.com and log in to read. |
General Sites
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 Funding Models (November 1) – DTC 338: Digital Publishing Sep 11, 2022|dtc-wsuv.org the she series |
 Crowdsourcing Mornings: The She Series Book - Geek Alabama geekalabama.com book. To learn more and to pledge money, go to: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/celara/the-she-series-book? |
 New Project: The She Series Kickstarter – Lauren Jankwoski www.laurenjankowski.com Donate here: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/celara/the-she-series-book |
 Project Announcement! – Amanda Cherry www.thegingervillain.com KICKSTARTER IS HERE! |
 Writing — Shin Hye Koo Aug 1, 2022|shinhyekoo.com Read More |
The She Series Book: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 1 | The title is too shortTITLE: 19 The first job of your headline is to grab attention. Describe your project with an easily understood, communicable and unique benefit. |
 2 | The description length may be too shortDESCRIPTION: 91 Consider revising the description wording. A good description can help potential backers understand what the project is about quickly. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.