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The Princess Who Saved Herself: Review, Funding & Stats

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/gregpak/the-princess-who-saved-herself
Scoring

Hyperstarter Score

45%

Better

Campaign

Goal Status

Funded

Backers

3,063

Pledge Amount

$111,759.48

of $15,000

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General Sites

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Music Monday: Jonathan Coulton
Sep 7, 2021|ecency.com

song, and even had a children's book based on it successfully crowdfunded . I already shared it here recently, but I'll happily

Fanbase Press - ‘Mech Cadet Yu #1:’ Comic Book Review
fanbasepress.com

of protector. Pak and artist Takeshi Miyazawa, who have also collaborated on other projects , discuss their thoughts on the new

Greg Pak • Code Monkey Save World
Dec 10, 2021|gregpak.com

I’ve learned from the Kickstarter campaigns for ABC Disgusting , The Princess Who Saved Herself , and Code Monkey Save World . (Also, please do

Princess Who Saved Herself Kickstarter Enters Final Day, Has Reached Over $100,000! - Following The Nerd - Following The Nerd
www.followingthenerd.com

You can check out the Kickstarter here !

#42Movies, Day 7: The Princess Who Saved Herself – Curtis C. Chen's Journal
May 6, 2020|www.curtiscchen.com

Many Hands: Family Music for Haiti , which later became a charming children’s book written by Greg Pak and illustrated by Takeshi Miyazawa .

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The Princess Who Saved Herself: Campaign Review & Analysis

Campaign Page Overview

Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement

Hyperstarter Score Breakdown

title4
The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 30

Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines.

description5
Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 111

The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project.

content1
There are 932 wordsWORD COUNT: 932

This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text.

links5
There are 9 external linksLINK COUNT: 9

Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust.

images1
There are 7 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 7

Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned.

Suggested Improvements

Congrats on overfunding!

Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.

TITLE: 30

The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.

WORD COUNT: 932

People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.

NUMBER OF IMAGES: 7

Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.