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Evelyn & Bobbie - The Future of Bras: Review, Funding & Stats

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/defybra/the-future-of-bras-is-here
Scoring

Hyperstarter Score

36%

Good

Campaign

Goal Status

Funded

Backers

3,507

Pledge Amount

$407,853

of $88,000

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Evelyn & Bobbie Bra Review for a large Over 40 Bustline - Wardrobe Oxygen
www.wardrobeoxygen.com

Evelyn & Bobbie had a Kickstarter , and it seems another Kickstarter , then

7 Ethical Fashion Crowdfunding Campaigns to Know Right Now — So608
Sep 11, 2020|www.spiritof608.com

this different kind of bra, you can check their Kickstarter here .

Are You Ready For Your Final Bra? Evelyn & Bobbie Think So | Dressing Room 8
www.dressingroom8.com

Kickstarter

Evelyn & Bobbie – FleshTone.net
May 6, 2019|fleshtone.net

bra as we know it. EB ran a very successful Kickstarter campaign which emphatically told us all that woman are more

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Evelyn & Bobbie- The Future of Bras

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Evelyn & Bobbie - The Future of Bras: Campaign Review & Analysis

Campaign Page Overview

Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement

Hyperstarter Score Breakdown

title4
The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 36

Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines.

description5
Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 109

The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project.

content1
There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0

This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text.

links5
Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0

Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust.

images1
Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0

Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned.

Suggested Improvements

Congrats on overfunding!

Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.

TITLE: 36

The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.

WORD COUNT: 0

People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.

NUMBER OF IMAGES: 0

Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.