The Art of Hand-Painted Patina Shoes: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/zerkaofficial/the-art-of-hand-painted-patina-shoesHyperstarter Score
73%
Excellent
Goal Status
Backers
11
Pledge Amount
£3,368
of £15,000
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The Art of Hand-Painted Patina Shoes: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 36 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 5 | Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 119 The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project. |
 3 | There are 1634 wordsWORD COUNT: 1634 The page is very long and might suffer from poor mobile conversion rate, consider shortening the number of words on the page. |
 5 | There are 2 external linksLINK COUNT: 2 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 5 | There are 46 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 46 Congratulations, this campaign has just the right number of images on the page. |
Suggested Improvements
Keep going with the campaign!
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
Having a large number of words on a campaign usually indicates information is written up in detail. Work out what questions backers have in their mind and answer them with the wording on the page.