The Animated Mind of Oliver Sacks: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/167681950/the-animated-mind-of-oliver-sacksHyperstarter Score
55%
Better
Goal Status
Backers
1,288
Pledge Amount
$124,295
of $100,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 The GLAAD Wrap: 'Whitney' in theaters now, 'We the Animals' trailer, new music from Taylor Bennett, Years & Years, and more! | GLAAD Oct 7, 2018|www.glaad.org first neurologist to see patients as people rather than diseases. Click here to support this project. |
 The Animated Mind of Oliver Sacks - a film in progress - Oliver Sacks | Official Website of Author, Neurologist & Foundation www.oliversacks.com Dempsey Rice , the filmmaker who brought us so many fascinating interviews |
General Sites
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 Oliver Sacks Film on Kickstarter — MetFilm Sales www.metfilmsales.com about the film and the campaign, head over to the Kickstarter page now . |
 Sub Genre | TAG as Branded Content & Other News | sub-genre.com and she’s making an animated doc film about Oliver Sacks: The Animated Mind of Oliver Sacks , and she’s raising funds now. I’ve consulted with Dempsey |
 On Fountain Pens » #noteworthyOFP: Oliver Sacks – a feature documentary on Kickstarter Mar 7, 2021|onfountainpens.com like to support them, here’s the link to the campaign: The Animated Mind of Oliver Sacks . |
 Oliver Sacks Film on Kickstarter — MetFilm Sales Aug 4, 2021|fox-arugula-kwme.squarespace.com about the film and the campaign, head over to the Kickstarter page now . |
The Animated Mind of Oliver Sacks: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 33 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 133 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 3 | There are 1748 wordsWORD COUNT: 1748 The page is very long and might suffer from poor mobile conversion rate, consider shortening the number of words on the page. |
 5 | There are 4 external linksLINK COUNT: 4 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 3 | There are 28 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 28 You may need to add a few more images. Whether it is product images, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
Having a large number of words on a campaign usually indicates information is written up in detail. Work out what questions backers have in their mind and answer them with the wording on the page.
View your copywriting as a supporting element, and do your best to structure your campaign around graphics and images. Animated GIFs show your product in action. Make sure you have at least 2 or 3 high-quality GIFs that span across the whole page width.