Swing!: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/swingpictures/swing-0Hyperstarter Score
21%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
794
Pledge Amount
$116,270.05
of $100,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
General Sites
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 KickStarter - Kickstarter Watch. | Page 21 | rpgcodex > 20 god-damned years and still a work in progress rpgcodex.net $00,116,270 Swing! |
 Hey Mister Jesse #081 — Yehoodi www.yehoodi.com - Support the Kickstarter project. |
 Kickstarter-funded Punch Out!! encyclopedia is a thing of beauty - Infendo: Nintendo News, Review, Blog, and Podcast infendo.com hand of interested backers. Projects on the site range from indie films , food-related products , journalism endeavors , and vast amounts of |
 Kickstart a Swing! Documentary or Two, Why Don’t Cha? | Wesleying wesleying.org The Kickstarter Link |
 Lindy Hop News and Noteworthy 2012 Edition — J.S.ALMONTE productions Apr 3, 2016|jsalmonteproductions.com successful as well as the push to fund the film, Swing The Documentary . |
Swing!: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 1 | The title is too shortTITLE: 6 The first job of your headline is to grab attention. Describe your project with an easily understood, communicable and unique benefit. |
 2 | The description length may be too shortDESCRIPTION: 88 Consider revising the description wording. A good description can help potential backers understand what the project is about quickly. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.