Stand Still Stay Silent - Book 2: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/hiveworks/stand-still-stay-silent-book-2Hyperstarter Score
36%
Good
Goal Status
Backers
3,525
Pledge Amount
$250,665
of $35,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Staff Favorites: MEATER: Wireless Smart Meat Thermometers, Sorcerer from White Wizard Games, Ravean RUGGED All-Terrain Jackets, Silvon Self-Cleaning Towels, and More! | BackerKit Dec 12, 2017|www.backerkit.com Stand Still Stay Silent - Book 2 |
 General Webcomics Thread For Liking Webcomics In - The Something Awful Forums forums.somethingawful.com Stand Still, Stay Silent has put up its second Kickstarter , this time for book 2. It's already well over |
General Sites
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 manga - Manga Bookshelf Sep 2, 2023|mangabookshelf.com is for the second volume of Minna Sundberg’s fantastic comic Stand Still, Stay Silent . (I enjoyed the first book tremendously.) |
 2017 - Félix Saparelli passcod.name Stand Still, Stay Silent |
 Edi̤̣o 264 РTerceira Terra www.terceiraterra.com Kickstarter deStand Still Stay Silent[ link ] |
 /ssss/ Stand Still, Stay Silent General: Smiley Boi Edition - Games - Veeky Forums Jun 6, 2020|veekyforums.com kickstarter.com/projects/hiveworks/stand-still-stay-silent-book-2/ |
 A Redtail’s Dream for University IP Management | Research Enterprise researchenterprise.org of her webcomicStand Still. Stay Silent . She then raised $250,000 on Kickstarter to print book two. The webcomic is available “for free” |
Stand Still Stay Silent - Book 2: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 32 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 5 | Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 127 The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.