Rhino Dolly - Big Moves for Small Teams: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/rhinocg/rhino-dolly-big-moves-for-small-teamsHyperstarter Score
55%
Better
Goal Status
Backers
70
Pledge Amount
$155,846
of $10,000
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Popular Sites
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Rhino Dolly - Big Moves for Small Teams: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 39 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 5 | Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 113 The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project. |
 1 | There are 1132 wordsWORD COUNT: 1132 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | There are 2 external linksLINK COUNT: 2 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 3 | There are 35 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 35 You may need to add a few more images. Whether it is product images, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
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Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
View your copywriting as a supporting element, and do your best to structure your campaign around graphics and images. Animated GIFs show your product in action. Make sure you have at least 2 or 3 high-quality GIFs that span across the whole page width.