"People of the Delta" Film Project: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/joeyl/people-of-the-delta-film-projectHyperstarter Score
36%
Good
Goal Status
Backers
1,229
Pledge Amount
$169,170.15
of $150,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Kickstarter Campaign for: “People of the Delta” Film Project on Vimeo Oct 2, 2016|vimeo.com|High Traffic out everything about the project on the Kickstarter website here: kickstarter.com/projects/joeyl/people-of-the-delta-film-project |
 The Five Critical Tips Every Traveling Photographer Should Know Jan 2, 2019|lifehacker.com|High Traffic very ambitious Kickstarter project |
 Interview with Photographer Joey L. | PetaPixel petapixel.com|High Traffic more about this project and support it financially over on its Kickstarter fundraising page .) |
 Fstoppers Sits Down With Joey Lawrence | Fstoppers fstoppers.com|High Traffic "The People of the Delta" Kickstarter |
 Five Critical Tips Every Travelling Photographer Should Know Mar 2, 2019|www.lifehacker.com.au City. There are less than 20 hours remaining on a very ambitious Kickstarter project for a personal film project set in Southern Ethiopia — |
General Sites
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 Interview with Joey Lawrence: A 23-year-old Photo Prodigy Apr 8, 2022|www.photowhoa.com Back his campaign here , or purchase Lara Jade vs Joey L. Proceeds from |
 Kickstarter Campaign for: "People of the Delta" Film Project by Joey L - Blog Photography Tips - ISO 1200 Magazine Mar 1, 2022|www.iso1200.com out everything about the project on the Kickstarter website here: kickstarter.com/projects/joeyl/people-of-the-delta-film-project |
 delta l - Reddit post and comment search - SocialGrep Jan 8, 2022|socialgrep.com "People of the Delta" Film Project by Joey L. |
 Creating an Indoor Blizzard | Inspirationist inspirationist.net went on a little workshop tour to raise funds for a personal film project of mine , ending with a internet creativeLIVE broadcast , I knew |
 Interview with Photographer Joey L. (2022) lubbil.com more about this project and support it financially over on its Kickstarter fundraising page .) |
"People of the Delta" Film Project: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 34 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 5 | Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 111 The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.