MARE INTERNUM: the sci-fi graphic novel: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/shingworks/mare-internum-the-sci-fi-graphic-novelHyperstarter Score
29%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
2,275
Pledge Amount
$140,452
of $25,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Mare Internum LE Softcover Pack shingworks.gumroad.com Major Wollaria ⊚ tier in the Mare Internum Kickstarter ( https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/shingworks/mare-internum-the-sci-fi-graphic-novel/ ) with the addition of the author's signature on the |
 General Webcomics Thread For Liking Webcomics In - The Something Awful Forums Jul 9, 2021|forums.somethingawful.com The Mare Internum train is still going strong (though it's slowing), and is |
General Sites
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 Crowdfunding Comics Roundup, March '18 - WWAC womenwriteaboutcomics.com Mare Internum is already an award-winning webcomic by award-winning webcartoonist Der-shing Helmer |
 The Complete MARE INTERNUM Launched on Kickstarter | Comicosity www.comicosity.com backers in 2016. And on March 15, they launched a Kickstarter campaign to fund their second indie comic title, the complete award-winning |
 geniusbee.tumblr.com - Tumbex May 2, 2023|www.tumbex.com https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/shingworks/mare-internum-the-sci-fi-graphic-novel?ref=8zos92 |
 Mare Internum | A science fiction webcomic - Chapter 5, Page 26 www.marecomic.com And obligatory MI book Kickstarter countdown: 8 days left! If you didn’t see it, last |
 The Otherknown - ch4 p10 Apr 2, 2020|www.otherknown.com my very favorite webcomics, Mare Internum , is doing a kickstarter right now for the full comic collected into one book |
MARE INTERNUM: the sci-fi graphic novel: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 39 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 135 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.