MAN-CHILD - Feature Film: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ryanbkoo/man-child-feature-filmHyperstarter Score
29%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
2,336
Pledge Amount
$125,100.75
of $115,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Amateur (2018 film) - Wikipedia en.m.wikipedia.org Koo, Ryan (20 November 2014). "We've changed our title to 'Amateur' — and you're invited to a Sundance Reading!" .kickstarter.com |
 Is 'Amateur' A True Story? This Netflix Movie Shows The Dark Side Of The Sports Industry Sep 4, 2018|www.bustle.com|High Traffic began working on the film back in 2011. In his Kickstarter campaign , the director pointed out that while there have been |
 TV Writer Podcast 033: Koo (The West Side, NoFilmSchool.com) Script Magazine podcast player.fm Man-Child , which is being funded through a crowd funding Kickstarter campaign . Follow Koo on Twitter: @ryanbkoo Visit Koo's web site: |
 iW’s Project of the Day: Basketball Prodigy Deals with It All in “Man-child” | IndieWire www.indiewire.com Kickstarter Page |
 Guerrilla Filmmaking Aug 11, 2018|leonardzelig.blogs.com|High Traffic |
General Sites
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 Finance Your Indy Film by Crowd Funding it on Kickstarter or IndieGoGo — Video Review & Approval screenlight.tv Ryan Koo successfully raised $115,000 for his first feature film, "Man-child" . |
 Double Team: Jason Sudeikis Gets Coached in Ryan Koo's "Amateur" - IONCINEMA.com May 11, 2022|www.ioncinema.com project successfully landed a good chunk of change via Kickstarter campaign and was selected as part of the 2014 January Screenwriters |
 KickStarter - Kickstarter Watch. | Page 21 | rpgcodex > 20 god-damned years and still a work in progress rpgcodex.net $00,125,100 MAN-CHILD - Feature Film |
 The Importance of Working for the Right People | The Black and Blue www.theblackandblue.com |
 Thoughts & Tips from the First Week Crowdfunding for a Feature Film - Manitoba Chambers of Commerce Feb 8, 2020|mbchamber.mb.ca first week of his funding campaign to raise $115,000 on Kickstarter for his film. |
MAN-CHILD - Feature Film: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 24 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 134 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
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