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Laurent Garnier: Off the Record: Review, Funding & Stats

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/featuristic/laurent-garnier-off-the-record
Scoring

Hyperstarter Score

29%

Need Improvement

Campaign

Goal Status

Funded

Backers

2,715

Pledge Amount

£155,320.39

of £1

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Referring page & text snippet
Laurent Garnier contará su vida en el documental ‘Off The Record’ – Electronic Groove
electronicgroove.com

conocer una campaña de recaudación de fondos a través de Kickstarter con la finalidad de que sus fans sean parte importante

Laurent Garnier主役のドキュメンタリー『Off The Record』のプロジェクトを発表 | clubberia
clubberia.com
Laurent Garnier goes ‘off the record’ in new documentary… – 909originals
909originals.com

movie production – albeit as part of a collective – click here for more information .

Laurent Garnier anuncia un documental sobre su vida - RAVERSMAG.COM
raversmag.com

llega acompañada de una campaña de captación de fondos en Kickstarter con un objetivo simbólico de tan solo 1 euro porque

Laurent Garnier is the focus of a new club culture documentary • EDM Honey
www.edmhoney.com

French superstar DJ Laurent Garnier has launched a Kickstarter to help fund his new documentary,Laurent Garnier: Off the Record,

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Laurent Garnier: Off the Record: Campaign Review & Analysis

Campaign Page Overview

Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement

Hyperstarter Score Breakdown

title4
The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 31

Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines.

description2
The description length may be too shortDESCRIPTION: 57

Consider revising the description wording. A good description can help potential backers understand what the project is about quickly.

content1
There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0

This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text.

links5
Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0

Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust.

images1
Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0

Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned.

Suggested Improvements

Congrats on overfunding!

Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.

TITLE: 31

The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.

DESCRIPTION: 57

What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.

WORD COUNT: 0

People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.

NUMBER OF IMAGES: 0

Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.