Last Days of Coney Island: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ralphbakshi/last-days-of-coney-island-0Hyperstarter Score
29%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
1,290
Pledge Amount
$174,195.38
of $165,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Bakshi Productions, Inc. Dec 3, 2015|vimeo.com|High Traffic LDCI on KICKSTARTER |
 Ralph Bakshi - Wikipedia Oct 5, 2022|en.wikipedia.org|High Traffic "Last Days of Coney Island" . Kickstarter . |
 Ralph Bakshi’s Animated Film ‘Last Days of Coney Island’ to Be Released on Vimeo Dec 1, 2022|www.yahoo.com|High Traffic The national release of “Last Days of Coney Island” follows a Kickstarter campaign that raised more than $174,000 from 1,290 backers. |
 Modern animation in the United States - Wikipedia en.m.wikipedia.org|High Traffic "Last Days of Coney Island" . Kickstarter . |
 Ralph Bakshi's 'Last Days of Coney Island' Gets Vimeo Release Date - Variety variety.com|High Traffic The national release of “Last Days of Coney Island” follows a Kickstarter campaign that raised more than $174,000 from 1,290 backers. |
General Sites
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 Bakshi's Back! Buy His Art, Fund His Movie | Jul 10, 2018|www.toplessrobot.com But it seems that something lit a fire under him again . |
 Wikizero - Modern animation in the United States wikizero.com "Last Days of Coney Island" . Kickstarter . |
 New Ralph Bakshi Project on Kickstarter - Sonic Youth Gossip ww.sonicyouth.com http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/...coney-island-0 |
 Animation Addicts Podcast - Disney, Pixar, & Animated Movie Reviews & Interviews | Rotoscopers - TopPodcast.com Oct 3, 2021|toppodcast.com ■ Ralph Bakshi's Last Days of Coney Island Kickstarter |
 Balloon Juice - Happy (Belated) Birthday, Gilbert Shelton! Oct 8, 2022|balloon-juice.com edited to add link: http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/ralphbakshi/last-days-of-coney-island-0?ref=live |
Last Days of Coney Island: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 25 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 131 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.