L'Arbre aux Hérons / The Herons' Tree: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/arbreauxherons/larbre-aux-herons-the-herons-treeHyperstarter Score
29%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
5,511
Pledge Amount
€373,525
of €100,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 O paraíso para amantes de vinho e gastro... www.scoop.it Apóie a construção da árvore em garças em Nantes!L'Arbre aux Hérons / The Herons' Tree by Les Machines de l'île |
 French Theater Troupe Plans Fantastical Hanging Garden Inspired by Jules Verne and Leonardo hyperallergic.com of Nantes and other public donors, Les Machines de l’île launched a Kickstarter on March 6 to try to raise as much money |
 Maker Pro News: Startups Are The Future of 3D Printing - Make: makezine.com a combination of a treehouse and a public greenspace. It’s already raised twice its original goal, with more than a month left. |
 A Project Aims to Create the World’s Largest Hanging Garden Since Babylon Within the Branches of a 114-Foot Tree — Colossal Jan 6, 2022|www.thisiscolossal.com|High Traffic to fund the rest through crowdfunding: you can contribute via Kickstarter . You can also track the project’s progress on Facebook |
 The Heron’s Tree: The World’s Largest Hanging Garden Since Ancient Babylon - WebUrbanist weburbanist.com of mechanical herons to fly over the tree’s hanging gardens. Les Machines de L’ile have launched a Kickstarter to expand it to its full potential, with a projected |
General Sites
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 8 Excellent New Kickstarter Projects This Week - GeekMom Oct 8, 2020|geekmom.com The Herons’ Tree by Les Machines de l’île |
 Friday Smackdown: Vensovian Gill Rifle - SolidSmack www.solidsmack.com The Herons’ Tree – A massive steel tree with walkways, hanging gardens and |
 A city in the sky: the urban imagination in Nantes - UP' Magazine up-magazine.info is currently being financed through participatory financing on the platform. Kickstarter.com . The project needs your help to bring this fantasy |
 Les Machines De l’île | Broadsheet.ie www.broadsheet.ie MORE: L’Arbre Aux Hérons (Kickstarter) |
 A project aims to create the world’s largest hanging garden since babylon within the branches of a 114-foot tree – Lefkadazin Feb 6, 2021|lefkadazin.gr |
L'Arbre aux Hérons / The Herons' Tree: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 37 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 132 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
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