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Hair Love | Animated Short Film: Review, Funding & Stats

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/matthewacherry/hair-love-animated-short-film
Scoring

Hyperstarter Score

55%

Better

Campaign

Goal Status

Funded

Backers

4,981

Pledge Amount

$284,058.28

of $75,000

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Referring page & text snippet
'Hair Love', Oscar-Nominated Animated Short, Was Funded On Kickstarter
moguldom.com

According to the Kickstarter website, Cherry raised $284,058 via 4,981 backers.

Day 21: Matthew A. Cherry - The Brown Bookshelf
thebrownbookshelf.com

Credit: Kickstarter campaign

‘Hair Love’ to Show Black Fatherhood and Pride in Natural Hair
rickeysmileymorningshow.com

who want to support the project can donate on the campaign page .

Matthew Cherry Developing Animated Film About Father Doing Black Girls Hair
www.curlynikki.com

filmmaker in his own right, Cherry has recently announced a Kickstarter campaign for his new animated short film, Hair Love.

4-year-old character’s ‘big, beautiful’ Afro has the attention of the internet - Black EOE Journal
Jan 8, 2020|blackeoejournal.com

player turned filmmaker with a prolific Twitter presence, launched a Kickstarter to bring Zuri and her father Stephen to life on

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Hair Love | Animated Short Film: Campaign Review & Analysis

Campaign Page Overview

Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement

Hyperstarter Score Breakdown

title4
The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 31

Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines.

description5
Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 120

The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project.

content1
There are 1035 wordsWORD COUNT: 1035

This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text.

links5
There are 1 external linksLINK COUNT: 1

Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust.

images3
There are 22 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 22

You may need to add a few more images. Whether it is product images, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned.

Suggested Improvements

Congrats on overfunding!

Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.

TITLE: 31

The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.

WORD COUNT: 1035

People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.

NUMBER OF IMAGES: 22

View your copywriting as a supporting element, and do your best to structure your campaign around graphics and images. Animated GIFs show your product in action. Make sure you have at least 2 or 3 high-quality GIFs that span across the whole page width.