enclave eyewear: twenty&twenty line: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/124039987/enclave-eyewear-twentyandtwenty-lineHyperstarter Score
36%
Good
Goal Status
Backers
3,612
Pledge Amount
$181,998.46
of $9,700
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 The Bridge Front Pocket Wallet — Tools and Toys Sep 8, 2013|toolsandtoys.net Daniel Kane, the guy behind these awesome Kickstarter sunglasses is back, with a front-pocket wallet that looks just great. |
General Sites
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 KickStarter - Kickstarter Watch. | Page 21 | rpgcodex > 20 god-damned years and still a work in progress rpgcodex.net $00,181,998 enclave eyewear: twenty&twenty line |
 IDEA - 8 Eyewear: From Idea, to Launch, to Growth (And Quitting the Job) | Page 4 | The Entrepreneur Discussion Forum: Talk Fastlane Business Aug 3, 2022|www.thefastlaneforum.com enclave eyewear: twenty&twenty line by Daniel Kane — Kickstarter |
 Page 6 of 115 for Dan Misener | The personal website of Dan Misener. misener.org more transparent aboutwhyit was taken down. The project page for enclave eyewear: twenty&twenty line now looks like this: |
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 Oh Snaps! That's tight...: September 2012 www.ohsnapsthatstight.com we can say 'mission accomplished'. More information on the project here , and more pictures and (and Kickstarter video) after the |
enclave eyewear: twenty&twenty line: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 35 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 5 | Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 108 The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
Congrats on overfunding!
Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.
The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.
People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.
Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.