D-Up: The Robotic Basketball Defender: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/jocklab/d-up-the-robotic-basketball-defenderHyperstarter Score
64%
Excellent
Goal Status
Backers
7
Pledge Amount
$255
of $50,000
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D-Up: The Robotic Basketball Defender: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 37 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 5 | Excellent, the description is just right!DESCRIPTION: 102 The number of words in the description is just right to capture attention and bring them into your project. |
 1 | There are 789 wordsWORD COUNT: 789 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | There are 10 external linksLINK COUNT: 10 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 5 | There are 66 imagesNUMBER OF IMAGES: 66 Congratulations, this campaign has just the right number of images on the page. |
Suggested Improvements
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