Chuck Palahniuk's Lullaby: Review, Funding & Stats
https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/footsteps/chuck-palahniuks-lullabyHyperstarter Score
29%
Need Improvement
Goal Status
Backers
5,186
Pledge Amount
$405,189.23
of $250,000
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Marketing & Backlinks
Popular Sites
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 Chuck Palahniuk to publish 'provocative' colouring-in book | Chuck Palahniuk | The Guardian www.theguardian.com|High Traffic for a film adaptation of his novel Lullaby, a project that has raised more than $333,000 (£235,000) on Kickstarter with a few days left to run. Later this month, |
 'Fight Club' Author Chuck Palahniuk Asks Fans to Help Fund a Movie Based on His Novel 'Lullaby' May 6, 2020|www.yahoo.com Yesterday, Palahniuk launched a Kickstarter page to fund a big-screen version of Lullaby , his |
 Chuck Paluhniuk's 'Lullaby' Movie Reaches Kickstarter Goal - Variety Mar 6, 2022|variety.com|High Traffic “Fight Club” novelist Chuck Palahniuk’s Kickstarter campaign to make a low-budget movie based on his 2002 novel |
 Lullaby (Palahniuk novel) - Wikipedia en.m.wikipedia.org|High Traffic https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/footsteps/chuck-palahniuks-lullaby/comments [ |
 Fight Club author Chuck Palahniuk turns to Kickstarter to finance his new movie - The Verge Jul 10, 2021|www.theverge.com|High Traffic |
General Sites
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 Cypher Chronicles, vol. 21-2016 - Monte Cook Games Dec 8, 2016|www.montecookgames.com Chuck Palahniuk’s Lullaby , by Josh Leake: “From the mind ofFight Clubauthor, Chuck |
 Fight Club 2 comic book trailer released, gives us more reason to break the first two rules of Fight Club | Sault Star www.saultstar.com of his 2002 book Lullaby, which he is hoping to fund through a Kickstarter campaign . |
 The "Inspiration in real life" Edition :: Issue #86, Rusty's Electric Dreams | Rusty's Electric Dreams www.electricdreaming.com :: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/footsteps/chuck-palahniuks-lullaby |
 Fight Club 2 comic book trailer released, gives us more reason to break the first two rules of Fight Club | The Stratford Beacon Herald www.stratfordbeaconherald.com of his 2002 book Lullaby, which he is hoping to fund through a Kickstarter campaign . |
 Fight Club 2 comic book trailer released, gives us more reason to break the first two rules of Fight Club | Chatham Daily News www.chathamdailynews.ca of his 2002 book Lullaby, which he is hoping to fund through a Kickstarter campaign . |
Chuck Palahniuk's Lullaby: Campaign Review & Analysis
Campaign Page Overview
Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement
Hyperstarter Score Breakdown
 4 | The title has a good length, but could more text be added?TITLE: 25 Add more characters to the title, perhaps add specific niche keywords? Look at adding more words by researching your closest competitors and use what they wrote for their headlines. |
 3 | Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 132 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit. |
 1 | There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text. |
 5 | Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust. |
 1 | Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned. |
Suggested Improvements
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