BEDLAM: Review, Funding & Stats

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/skyshinegames/bedlam

Scoring

Hyperstarter Score

21%

Need Improvement

Campaign

Goal Status

Funded

Backers

5,266

Pledge Amount

$166,540.76

of $130,000

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Marketing & Backlinks

Popular Sites

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List of video game crowdfunding projects - Wikipedia en.wikipedia.org\|High Traffic Skyshine Games (2014-09-25). "Bedlam" . Kickstarter
Eric Spitler - Mutant King Bobble Head Apr 4, 2018\|ericspitler.artstation.com head for backers. Check out the kickstarter pitch here : https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/skyshinegames/bedlam and back them if you like it. Concept was done
Bedlam Gets a Release Window - IGN www.ign.com
New RPG Is A Love Letter To Fallout, XCOM & FTL kotaku.com\|High Traffic seeking $130,000 on Kickstarter
Latest Articles (Page 1205) \| Rock Paper Shotgun Oct 12, 2022\|www.rockpapershotgun.com sale on Early Access and another has only just begun its Kickstarter dance . I post about the latter now, not because of

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General Sites

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Bjorn's Content - Page 151 - Idle Forums www.idlethumbs.net done this month, so I suppose the moratorium can end!). Bedlam looks soo fucking good. And overall they seem to have
BEDLAM Launches Kickstarter Campaign, Will Use The Banner Saga Game Engine – Capsule Computers Oct 2, 2017\|www.capsulecomputers.com.au a September 2015 release on PC and Mac. Back them at Kickstarter .
Release 11 Instructions \| Shroud of the Avatar Oct 5, 2022\|www.shroudoftheavatar.com you like what you see then jump over to the BEDLAM Kickstarter page and pledge your support (only 2 days left)!
Kickstarter projects - Page 58 - netgamers.it netgamers.it https://www.kickstarter.com/projects...negames/bedlam
BEDLAM: post-apocalyptic RPG with The Banner Saga engine www.bay12forums.com Kickstarter: www.kickstarter.com/projects/skyshinegames/bedlam

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BEDLAM: Campaign Review & Analysis

Campaign Page Overview

Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement

Hyperstarter Score Breakdown

1	The title is too shortTITLE: 6 The first job of your headline is to grab attention. Describe your project with an easily understood, communicable and unique benefit.
3	Consider revising the description lengthDESCRIPTION: 135 Is the description to-the-point and concise? Focus on the main features of the campaign and how a backer can benefit.
1	There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text.
5	Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust.
1	Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned.

Suggested Improvements

Congrats on overfunding!

Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.

TITLE: 6

The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.

DESCRIPTION: 135

What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.

WORD COUNT: 0

People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.

NUMBER OF IMAGES: 0

Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.