Among the Sleep: Review, Funding & Stats

https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/krillbite/among-the-sleep

Scoring

Hyperstarter Score

21%

Need Improvement

Campaign

Goal Status

Funded

Backers

8,110

Pledge Amount

$248,358.69

of $200,000

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Marketing & Backlinks

Popular Sites

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Among the Sleep - Wikipedia en.wikipedia.org\|High Traffic Kickstarter campaign
Fear through the eyes of a child: 'Among the Sleep' is a very different horror game - The Verge www.theverge.com\|High Traffic Among the Sleep , an upcoming game that just launched a Kickstarter campaign , aims to exploit that fact by putting you in
List of video game crowdfunding projects - Wikipedia Aug 7, 2020\|en.m.wikipedia.org Krillbite Studio (2013-04-18). "Among the Sleep" . Kickstarter
monetization - Crowdfunding an indie game. What should I offer back? - Game Development Stack Exchange gamedev.stackexchange.com\|High Traffic Among the Sleep
Among the Sleep Coming to PS4 – PlayStation.Blog blog.playstation.com\|High Traffic around the web, the project even resulted in a successful Kickstarter campaign that raised an incredible $248,358! Up to that point, we

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General Sites

103

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Hardcore Gaming 101 - Blog: May 2013 blog.hardcoregaming101.net Among the Sleep by the Norwegian Krillbite Studio doesn't have that problem as
Among the Sleep Dec 10, 2021\|forum.frictionalgames.com http://www.kickstarter.com/projects/kril...sts/480797
Among the Sleep PC News \| GameWatcher Nov 4, 2017\|www.gamewatcher.com Kickstarter campaign
Review of Among the Sleep Alpha \| Halloween Love Jul 2, 2017\|halloweenlove.com hasn’t been officially released yet, you can play the free Alpha Version for PC, Mac, and Linux. Feel free to try it
Among the Sleep: First Impressions \| Se7enSins Gaming Community www.se7ensins.com looking to try the alpha, you can grab a copy here .

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Among the Sleep: Campaign Review & Analysis

Campaign Page Overview

Detailed breakdown and suggestions for improvement

Hyperstarter Score Breakdown

1	The title is too shortTITLE: 15 The first job of your headline is to grab attention. Describe your project with an easily understood, communicable and unique benefit.
2	The description length may be too shortDESCRIPTION: 91 Consider revising the description wording. A good description can help potential backers understand what the project is about quickly.
1	There are no wordsWORD COUNT: 0 This campaign needs more text on the page. Think about what questions potential backers will have on their minds, answer them through imagery and detailed descriptive text.
5	Not PresentLINK COUNT: 0 Having a small number of outbound links to other sites showing reports, company sites etc., can help build trust.
1	Not presentNUMBER OF IMAGES: 0 Consider adding more such as more product images including people, a features list including text and icons, timeline, photos of the people involved in the project and/or images of where you have been mentioned.

Suggested Improvements

Congrats on overfunding!

Just keep pushing the campaign whether it is leveraging your own contacts, updating your ads or retargeting an existing audience or trying pitching and outreach to influencers in your specific niche.

TITLE: 15

The first job of your title and headline is to get attention. The way you capture someone's attention is by describing your project in an easy to understand manner. It also helps if your product has a superlative label. For example: Is it the "World's Best ____?", the "first _____?", the "fastest____?" etc. Can you explain to potential backers how your product is lighter, faster, quicker, bigger, smaller, better than competitors.

DESCRIPTION: 91

What makes your product unique? What makes it different from the others? Explain in your description what makes your product, different, better, cooler...more unique than all its competitors.

WORD COUNT: 0

People love reading stories. It's why fiction authors outsell non-fiction authors by at least 1,000-to-1. Your product has a creation story, an origin and you may have stories of customers who have used your product and how it changed their lives. Tell these stories on your project page.

NUMBER OF IMAGES: 0

Not only do visuals draw a potential backers attention to the sections that they care about, but they also make your campaign appear more professional and well-crafted. Check how your "hero" image looks like as a thumbnail.